'Tis a lovely tale full of worldbuilding and charactercraft! I'd like to know more of the boys's nursemaid, Loigedellia. Among all, she was quite the interesting character, laden with perceived mystery.
This was gorgeous! I love the Indo-European influence (having the main characters be twins is a nice touch). Just out of curiosity, did you name Maelos after Manu (one of the divine twins in the PIE creation myth)? His character stood out to me particularly. I was also intrigued by Loigedellia, she seems like someone who could benefit from having her own story.
Both Maelos and Voth are named after the character Mael-Fothartaig in the Irish saga "Fingal Ronain" (the "Kinslaying of Ronan"), I just added a PIE flare to their names. The archetype of the Divine Twins, however, was certainly an influence in writing them.
I would definitely like to explore different characters in this serial outside of Maelos and Voth, and seems like Loigedellia might be a good choice for one of those!
'Tis a lovely tale full of worldbuilding and charactercraft! I'd like to know more of the boys's nursemaid, Loigedellia. Among all, she was quite the interesting character, laden with perceived mystery.
This was gorgeous! I love the Indo-European influence (having the main characters be twins is a nice touch). Just out of curiosity, did you name Maelos after Manu (one of the divine twins in the PIE creation myth)? His character stood out to me particularly. I was also intrigued by Loigedellia, she seems like someone who could benefit from having her own story.
Both Maelos and Voth are named after the character Mael-Fothartaig in the Irish saga "Fingal Ronain" (the "Kinslaying of Ronan"), I just added a PIE flare to their names. The archetype of the Divine Twins, however, was certainly an influence in writing them.
I would definitely like to explore different characters in this serial outside of Maelos and Voth, and seems like Loigedellia might be a good choice for one of those!