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The imagery in this story is outstanding. Your word-pictures are vivid and paint a setting that is present and tangible to the reader. The weald , and it light and sounds and smells were as real to me as if I were there with Aethelmar and Ealdgyd. Looking forward to the next story.

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Dec 7, 2023Liked by Ethan Sabatella

Yes, the imagery of the Hunt was quite thrilling in its depiction. Well done.

I never quite understood how so many of the Celtic and Norse people were lured away from their gods and towards Christianity. It just seems to run counter to their culture and beliefs.

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There was a lot of social and political benefits that came with it at the time. A large amount of pagan beliefs may have survived conversion but were repurposed to fit the Christian narrative.

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Nov 26, 2023Liked by Ethan Sabatella

Enjoyed the read. Not sure if this was your objective, but brought to my mind how many men are beguiled by a woman. Was this a small part of the moral of this story?

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Potentially! I like to leave some things up to the reader, though I'm also not overly conscious of putting "messages" in my stories.

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