This is some fun grindhouse style gore-ror horror; gruesome, visceral, and creatively over the top to the point that you straddle the line between some proper slasher/survival horror and parody. It's a hard line to tread without stumbling too far in either direction, but you're balancing it well. That your PoV character, Kevin, is a lead I find myself wanting to follow certainly helps that, as does the fact his friends aren't insufferable, as is so often the case in stories of this nature. Not bad at all. I look forward to seeing what other havoc these killer klowns (not from outer space, presumably) get up to, and even more than that, how your cast is going to make their way through.
This is some fun grindhouse style gore-ror horror; gruesome, visceral, and creatively over the top to the point that you straddle the line between some proper slasher/survival horror and parody. It's a hard line to tread without stumbling too far in either direction, but you're balancing it well. That your PoV character, Kevin, is a lead I find myself wanting to follow certainly helps that, as does the fact his friends aren't insufferable, as is so often the case in stories of this nature. Not bad at all. I look forward to seeing what other havoc these killer klowns (not from outer space, presumably) get up to, and even more than that, how your cast is going to make their way through.
I'm so glad you're digging it so far! I'm excited to share the rest, bit-by-bit...